"Who are you?" I cut straight to the chase, I had no time to waste. I had the package in my pocket and had around three minutes before the alarm bells would ring.
"I knew you were one to cut straight to it but that was a little rude." His hand dropped to his side.
"Who are you, I don't have time to waste." I glanced over my shoulder - nothing yet.
"It is not who I am that matters, it is my employer." He opened the door of the passenger side of my car and offered it to me. My car. I got in and he got in a started the car.
"Who are you?" I asked for the third time.
"I am Detective Inspector Daniels and you've been arrested."
OK, this is part of a story about me - Lynxia Lost. I don't think this would be the start - somewhere around the beginning but not the beginning. Tell me what you think.